She was playing with doggy when he climbed up the tree.
“What can you sh-ee doggy ?” She asked in her soft voice.
“I can see a fairy land” The dog replied.
“Tell me more” She giggled.
“There are houses made of candies and a river of your favorite chocolate milk! Everyone is so happy” He continued.
“Wow can you take me up with you? I want to sh-ee the world” She insisted.
“You are too little to handle the reality of this cruel world my friend” Come play with me.
And she ran after doggy to play again.
38 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – The World Out There Is Cruel.”
I like how she says she wants to “sh-ee the world”. How sweet that doggie makes the world sound magical, when in reality, it can be an ugly place!
Yes Janna ! You are right 🙂 Thanks a bunch for taking out your time for reading my posts and commenting 🙂 I love to read your thoughts. Much Love xx
Refreshing, thanks! . . .
Thank you 🙂 xx
Remarkable prospect Lala,have a bright new 2014.jalal
Thank you Jalal ! Your comments are always welcome 🙂 You too have a joyous New year 🙂 Stay blessed xx
so sweet, Lala…love your story ♥
Aww Thank you sunshine you made my day bright 🙂 Love you xx
Oh goodness, the message conveyed secretly! I’m so loving it. So, nicely done. Bravo!
Oh Thank you so much ! So glad to know you liked it that much 🙂 Many many thanks. Love xx
Good advice from doggy.
It sure is 🙂 Thank you ! Love xx
Magnificent imagination — the last talk of the dog is rather mature in the said situation but, at some extent it is acceptable in a very short story.
The dog seen another world from the top of a tree — it is a good idea of a fantasy tale for children.
Oh Thank you so much once again….Ap bohat achay hain 🙂 Actually we had to write a fiction relatd to the photo in 100 words so I can’t come up with anything better. Ap k alfaaaz ne dil khush ker dia…Bohat boha shukriya Itna achay alfaaz kehnay k leye 🙂 Love you ! xx
I think it is not only a race limited to the words but to the time also!!??
Beside this thing — maintaining the same atmosphere related to the character’s intellectual level is also essential — and a real race!!!
Hamesha khush rahain.
A whole week is given for these challenges so there is no problem regarding time. These rules just invent ore innovation 🙂 You are right ! Ap bhi khush rahain Sadaa 🙂 xx
Well..i have to say..although I am not a dog person..it’s kinda kool that dog spelled backwards is GOD..
And i do have to say..that my cat told me ALL there IS to know about GOD..after i could no longer connect to mother earth..hugged it..but no feelings came back to me…
I watched that beautiful Cat laying peaceful in the grass..and turning and turning and turning…in the sand and in the sun…
And then i finally understood…
Who GOD IS….
IS what it took..to find GOD….
Simply existing one and as…
So meow and there’s always time for paws to ya…..
Thank you for sharing your thoughts 🙂 Love xx
Sweet and tender story of a best friend protecting youthful innocence. Love it!
Oh Thank you so much friend for liking it. Love you ! xx
A dog doing his job. Protecting the child.
Yes he definitely is 🙂 Thanks for reading ! Much Love xx
This piece would be a very heartfelt short story/chidren’s book. Your writing makes me smile- the BEST compliment I could write. I love when I can “See it:….and I did! Thanks- wonderful write
Oh My ! This comment is the best thing that happened to me today ! How lovely is this appreciation…I am HONORED ! Thank you beautiful for such great lovely words. So glad to know you liked it to THIS extent. Love you loads and loads ! You are LOVE 🙂 xoxo
So cute… a very nice dog to tell the sweet little lies…. play little girl
Thank you so much I am glad you felt the cuteness hidden 🙂 Love you ! xx
Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. Be forewarned. Once you start it’s hard to stop.
Cute story. Best the child remains innocent as long as possible.
Thank you so much Ma’m for this warm welcome ! I loved the challenge and I have decided to follow it through out the year. Thank you loads for liking my story. Looking forward to the next challenge 🙂 Love you ! Stay happy 🙂 xx
Sweet doggie friend.
Yes he is 🙂 Thank you Love ! xx
innocent feelings expressed.
Thank you Sarwat 🙂
He’s keeping her safe from the cruel world and having her play with him, that’s precious.
Yes it sure is 🙂 Thanks for sharing our thoughts Nicole hope you are having a good day 🙂 Much Love xx
awww girls best friend
Yeah definitely 🙂 Love you xxx