Friday Fictioneers – The World Out There Is Cruel.


She was playing with doggy when he climbed up the tree.

“What can you sh-ee doggy ?” She asked in her soft voice.

“I can see a fairy land” The dog replied.

“Tell me more” She giggled.

“There are houses made of candies and a river of your favorite chocolate milk! Everyone is so happy” He continued.

“Wow can you take me up with you? I want to sh-ee the world” She insisted.

“You are too little to handle the reality of this cruel world my friend” Come play with me.

And she ran after doggy to play again.

38 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – The World Out There Is Cruel.

    • Yes Janna ! You are right πŸ™‚ Thanks a bunch for taking out your time for reading my posts and commenting πŸ™‚ I love to read your thoughts. Much Love xx

  1. Magnificent imagination — the last talk of the dog is rather mature in the said situation but, at some extent it is acceptable in a very short story.
    The dog seen another world from the top of a tree — it is a good idea of a fantasy tale for children.

    • Oh Thank you so much once again….Ap bohat achay hain πŸ™‚ Actually we had to write a fiction relatd to the photo in 100 words so I can’t come up with anything better. Ap k alfaaaz ne dil khush ker dia…Bohat boha shukriya Itna achay alfaaz kehnay k leye πŸ™‚ Love you ! xx

      • πŸ™‚
        I think it is not only a race limited to the words but to the time also!!??
        Beside this thing — maintaining the same atmosphere related to the character’s intellectual level is also essential — and a real race!!!
        Hamesha khush rahain.

        • A whole week is given for these challenges so there is no problem regarding time. These rules just invent ore innovation πŸ™‚ You are right ! Ap bhi khush rahain Sadaa πŸ™‚ xx

  2. Well..i have to say..although I am not a dog’s kinda kool that dog spelled backwards is GOD..

    And i do have to say..that my cat told me ALL there IS to know about GOD..after i could no longer connect to mother earth..hugged it..but no feelings came back to me…

    I watched that beautiful Cat laying peaceful in the grass..and turning and turning and turning…in the sand and in the sun…

    And then i finally understood…

    Who GOD IS….


    Without GOD..

    IS what it find GOD….

    Simply existing one and as…

    My CAT…………………………………

    So meow and there’s always time for paws to ya…..

  3. This piece would be a very heartfelt short story/chidren’s book. Your writing makes me smile- the BEST compliment I could write. I love when I can “See it:….and I did! Thanks- wonderful write

    • Oh My ! This comment is the best thing that happened to me today ! How lovely is this appreciation…I am HONORED ! Thank you beautiful for such great lovely words. So glad to know you liked it to THIS extent. Love you loads and loads ! You are LOVE πŸ™‚ xoxo

  4. Dear Lala,

    Welcome to Friday Fictioneers. Be forewarned. Once you start it’s hard to stop.

    Cute story. Best the child remains innocent as long as possible.



    • Thank you so much Ma’m for this warm welcome ! I loved the challenge and I have decided to follow it through out the year. Thank you loads for liking my story. Looking forward to the next challenge πŸ™‚ Love you ! Stay happy πŸ™‚ xx

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