Life ‘Inception’
Riddle wrapped in Enigma
Prehistoric pen shrieks
Echoing Like
Tunnels in Labyrinth
Reflecting tales of illusions
Time follows the quest
Of Unreachable stars
Struggles and failures
Bleed into Hope
The cycle Continues.
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This 33 words piece is written for Trifecta Challenge. The challenge this week was to write a 33 words response to the Picture given. Click on the Badge to read other beautiful entries.
White Shadows 
The cycle continues and it’s very important to get up when you get knocked down.
That’s a good work. Well done, Lala. Blessings and love to you ♥
Nice… 😉
Accha he… 😉
ohh WOW!
The quest of unreachable stars = beautiful! This is a great peace and I love the way you structured it on the page.
I love prehistoric pen shrieks.
Awesome work.
I love it when content and structure blend so seamlessly together, as you have done in this poem. Much hope and optimism in this poem. Very inspiring in all regards. Well done! 🙂
Very cool poem. I really liked this image: “Echoing Like / Tunnels in Labyrinth / Reflecting tales of illusions.”
woW just visit your blog and found this poetry, very well written & I love the way you write it.
This is so lovely, Lala! Love the structure and the hope in the end. 🙂
What a real picture you drew here and oh so beautifully!Loved it Lala:-)
Love the arrangement and the sentiment!
I loved that ‘struggles and failures bleed into hope’. LM x
your words, “prehistoric pen” caught my attention as the way you creatively presented your words that feel quite intense. powerful take on the challenge, Lala. i love it.
Time follows the quest
The cycle Continues.
So Wonderful…. Especially the “Time follows quest” part
This was gorgeous, Lala. As long as hope is part of the cycle, we will be ok. Hugs, beautiful friend:)
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“The farthest Star”
True th@tHe Prehistoric Pen leads to labyrinth of illusion..
B
ut..as long as tHere is hope..for truth..
Th@illusion..2..
BEcomes….
ILLUSION…2
AND THEN the feathered
shape of yOur song.. instead of boom..
..e rang..becomes a rocket..fueled.. to reach th@star..the farthest star..the star t o F ALL that comes….
AV
GAIN
ASoNE..
tHe PHOENIX
LIVES AGAIN
SO YoUR
Poetry
flies
a
GAIN
ASONE
LOVE
XY
Z
And by the way…!ya!..
are simply brilliant.. dear..
the World WILL be @loss…
if yoUr marr..i..age..
stops yOUR
words…
i encourage ya to continue on….
after ya adjust to
marriage..
and..
yah.. i know
th@ain’t
gonna
be
easy..
but yaH..i will be
waiting..herE
as usuAlly
for yOur
words…
then
2
🙂
LOVEXx
(little x means respect
2;)
by
the way
Lovely words artistically arranged for effect. Thank you Lala 🙂
Amazing
Beautifully written, every word lends a descriptive image/feeling.
As long as it cycles to hope, the Illusions can come and go 🙂
wow.
Thanks 😛