The Magnificent Woman


I am in love with that wonderful women who performs on the stage and people hold their breaths, their hearts skip the beats and magic of her glory en-wraps them in ecstatic joys — People say that she knows spell of bewitchment and she makes people unconscious by casting it but I don’t believe this, her magical beauty is mysterious enough to get entranced in.

She has booked a room that was abandoned for forty years, the room that is well known by a story that a woman burnt herself and her child here, forty years ago.

I can hear my own foot steps as I walk towards her room, my heart beats in my ears and I feel shivers while walking through that dead silent corridor but my fear is invaded over by excitement to meet that magnificent lady.

The door opens with an unfamiliar noise, tearing apart the intense silence — There lies a coffin in the center of an empty room and I am in a trance of that glowing beauty again as I open the cover.

I try to pull her out wondering who may have imprisoned my love inside the coffin, when I feel my leg clutched by tiny hands — I turn around and see a small child looking towards me with pain in eyes… Everything went dark.


A Flash fiction written forΒ Lillie McFerrin Writes :Β Five Sentence Fiction – Clutch. We have to include the word “clutch” in our story and take inspiration from the photo given. Five sentences is what this challenge requires, no word limit. Click on the link if you want to participate.

34 thoughts on “The Magnificent Woman

  1. I love how this builds, and I can feel the excitement of this character. Even you as the writer!

    Who says passion doesn’t communicate.

    Strong work, a dream?

    • Yes passion communicates for sure πŸ™‚ Love to see you here Godtisx welcome to my world πŸ™‚ Thanks so very much for stopping by to share your amazing thoughts. I feel appreciated ! Not a dream, just some thoughts collected together πŸ™‚ Love and hugs to you xx

      • Oh thank-you! I appreciate the return compliment! πŸ™‚

        And thank-you for the welcome, looking forward to reading more! πŸ™‚ And I am glad you feel appreciated, you should!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        Keep collecting your thoughts together Lala, it’s great stuff. You don’t have to try to be a writer, you are one (re: your about me section).

        Love and Hugs to you. xoxo

        • Oh you are just so sweet my new friend πŸ™‚ I feel so glad connecting with you πŸ™‚
          Thank you for calling me a writer, you are so nice to say that πŸ™‚
          Love you so much beautiful πŸ™‚ xx

  2. woah..that’s watch ya call a 360 degree turn

    bliss to misery…

    We’ll first of all i love to watch woman like this perform on stage…

    Currently one of my favorites is Britney her song called work B***H

    Well some folks around here call it dirty..and oh my god..some folks even go as far as calling her
    a satan worshiper in what they describe as part of a mythological ‘evil’ illuminati…

    But ya see..or KNOWnow..human beings have this thing..called a mirror neuron system..where they
    can actually experience the actual experiences of others in a virtual mind kind of way when they watch
    these other folks..

    The greatest thing about Britney is that she incorporates..whether intentionally or naturally.. the TAI CHI
    in her dance when watching her.. folks with an open mind..heart.and spirit..can simply experience
    the bliss that TAI CHI IS…in a virtual kind of way….

    So in a way that makes MS. Britney a prophet or messenger of the power of this TAI CHI that really is not
    substantially different that what folks call the DAO..the QI..the CHI..the holy spirit..the GOD..the ALLAH..the great spirit..
    or whatever vehicle or vessel any human being can use to describe the essence of WH@IS IS…THIS essence of IS

    The bliss that simply IS DIVINE LOVE OVERALL

    So now back to the 360 degree part…

    That is the part i avoid at all costs in real life..and do not let anything like that enter my mind..heart.or spirit…

    But not to say it is not effective for SOME people to escape what is truly bothering them at night.

    my friend..


    • OH..and.. by the way..

      When i dance-walk through the huge local metro mall..for 23 miles and all of that..

      i too..incorporate the TA CHI..naturALLy in my dance moves..

      And yes..people tell me they experience..

      my bliss..peace…power..and energy..CHI..

      when they observing me do this..

      As so…

      So..ya see..or KNOWnow..

      a few months ago..

      When i stated i could light UP a mall…

      i then too..

      was not kidding at all..

      my friend..


      • Oh god..sorry to keep going on and finally one more thing..

        My next post IS titled Dancing with GOD.

        And as usual..i could not do IT



        but my wife is pressing me on
        a few assigned chores of the day…

        so a little later

        will come2

        Thanks for the help LOVE

        • Britney Spears is quite good actually she has no match with this dead magical witch type lady in my story πŸ˜› I read your post already where you have shared my story and your thoughts. Thank you o much for sharing Friend and thanks for reading my story. Love you xx

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