“Moon, Moon on the sky,
Hold me up, take me high
Clench your sigh, watch me die”
A morbid smile conquered her calm face. Calmness that escalates after a big storm passes, or when one is about to come.
“Have you ever talked to the moon?” Without glancing at me nodding head in negation, she continued.
“I have, It is my only companion since I was 5. It was my hero, a mysterious bewitching radiant ball of light. I played with it, told my secrets to it and slept in it’s shadow. And then…. and then it started playing with me” Her voice turned quivery.
“I got tangled up in it’s myth. In the full moon nights I feel supernatural. A nice sharp feeling starts cutting inside me and my hollowness grows. Instead of blood, loneliness comes out and I swear, It is more horrendous, dreadful. It pierces my soul….It aches, It hurts !” I felt tears mixing with her voice.
“Today’s a full moon night” I thought to myself. Shifting my eyes from the moon towards her, I realized – She was gone.
A werewolf was standing right beside me.
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A post written in response to Daily Prompt: Heroic and also for Five Sentence Fiction – Moon.
Oh my God, OMG OMG OMG Awesome.
^ That’s seriously what response I had jab I read this. Amazing things that your pen writes, Lala. How you’ve described those dark feelings, pain, moonlight! ❤
Haye Maria Thank you itna sara 🙂 Love you muje nae pata tha tumhain ye itna acha lagay ga you are just LOVE ❤ Thanks a bunch !! Love you so much.
Haha. My pleasure. ^_^
Your stories aj kal are SO completely amazing, how they twist and express and how you keep the flow and imagery, aala. (Y)
Haha I am just trying out things Maria you read and that’s why I write aur tareef tu pher bonus hai 😉 😛 Love you so much xx
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“a mysterious bewitching ball of light”–truer words never spoken! Enjoyed the ending to this one too.
Thank you C.C I appreciate you stopping by and sharing your thoughts. Love to you xx
I love this ❤
Thank you beautiful ! Appreciate you stopping by 🙂
You are welcome! I appreciate you writing ❤
Wa Wa bahut khoob! Nicely expressed! Thanks 🙂
Thank you Dilip so glad to hear back from you 🙂 Hope you are having a good time. Love to you xx
the poetry is amazing Rukh…!! loved the way it rhymes…
a short n crisp post.. amazing!! keep it up!! loved the way it was portrayed!
Thank you so much Neeli I appreciate your beautiful comments and all the encouragement 🙂 So glad to know that you loved it. Welcome to my world 🙂 Hope to see you soon. Much Love xx
The moon is where I want to go.
Me too 😉 Thanks for stopping by ! Love xx
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Love this!
Thanks a bunch Audrey 🙂 Glad you stopped by !
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I love the poem in the first part.
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Thank you 🙂 xx
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well..i guess.. I’m still standing beside you friend…;)
LOVEXX
WEREWOLVES..GOT FEELINGS TOo …
YA KNOWNow..:)
Haha thank you ! I actually described my feelings and gave them the name of werewolf in the story. Thanks for standing by my side 🙂 Love xx