She lives at a place far away. Perspiring sun rays of hope caress her face to welcome her mornings. She opens her home’s door and walk through the stairs like a queen. Butterflies take her to the seraphic valleys. She dances in ecstasy. Tickling winds make her giggle. Her laughs are loathed in euphoria. She opens her wings and flies with the birds. Sparkling sea water washes her feet. She sings with mermaids and fall asleep in ethereal embrace.
And yet in this monstrous world, resides her body void of soul – indulged in the weightless mysteries of naked truths.
White Shadows 
i like the build up and then you hit us with the void. nicely done, Lala βΊ
Yes reality has to come to senses sometimes….Thank you so much Sun ! You are lovely π xx
Very poetic with a surprise twist in the last couple of lines.
Thank you so much Subroto . Glad you stopped by π Love xx
hmmm, an oil spill in paradise.
(Lovely picture )
Lol you can say that ! Thanks for stopping by π xx
The bad thing about this is: everyone already said what I wanted to say! I liked it: it’s almost like we are in the illusion, but by being there, we lose what’s important. We need truth.
You are so right Stephanie ! We need the truth at the end. Well I’d love to hear the words already been said, from you anytime π So glad you stopped by to share your lovely thoughts π Love xx
I could almost see sparkles when reading this beautiful piece. And the last line was such a contrast! Well done!
That’s the difference between fantasy and reality π Thanks so much for reading and for your kind thoughts. Appreciate them π Love xx
Dear Lala,
Lovely, poetic, but the last couple of lines tell a whole story. Detachment and survival mode. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thank you so much Rochelle for your kind words. You appreciation means a lot ! Thanks for stopping by ! Love you xx
Metaphysically poetic. I enjoyed reading.
I am so glad that you enjoyed reading it. Many thanks for stopping by ! Love xx
I agree that it’s very poetic.
janet
Thank you very much Janet. Glad you stopped by ! Love xx
how can u be so awsome..i feel jealous of you.:D
keep it up God bless you always love….
Haha there’s no need to get jealous sweetheart, You are more awesome than me π Thank you so much for your honest prayers. Love you xx
love u…
Love you too my love xx
thanku…:D
Beautiful imagery π and poetic π Would love to meet her( if their is someone like her π ) π
Haha you just met her π That was about me. Thanks so much for appreciation and for stopping by ! Love you π xx
Hmm..i would rather stay in the 1st paragraph..and in effect AND AFFECT..you just described my way of life there…
The world is illusion..only culture really..The world is real in nature..
And that is the place of the 1st paragraph..which i suppose could be imagination…2
But connection to nature..is Still the real thing..i think…
i act.
IAM
as one
with
ONE
IS wHere IT’s@
&LOVE
i visited a new church today..and they suggested that people stay away from people who do not believe the same..
So glad i found GOD in nature..th@ONE never excludes anyone..from the fuller party that truly IS life…
So i guess i’ll take their word for it..and travel somewhere else..where everyone is wanted…
As that is how i believe…..
AS always NOW..again..one with ONE..and all the rest…forever next….NOW
Smiles to ya..and still patiently waiting..(tapping foot gently) for the rest of that other suspenseful story….:)LOVEXX
So glad to know that you stay and live in the first paragraph ! For me that perfect fantasy life is where her soul lives and her body lives in this monstrous world where life don’t let you enjoy the beauty of nature !
So good to know you are mixing up with people. Keep going like this π
Lol I haven’t planned on writing the next part yet but feeling your anxiety I guess I should think about it now π xx
Haha..just playing with you dear…like a little child..
Take your time..i ain’t going anywhere..:)lovexx
Kya yaar Lala, achcha se silsila chal raha tha, and usey khinch ke neechey le aayi – into this monstrous world! Abhi main is ko fancy kar rahi hoon: ethereal embrace. Aur mujhe disturb mat karna, please. Lol.
Haha ab reality b tu koi cheez hoti hai na….we ave to face it eventually after living long in a world of fantasy ! Awww sleep tight in the ethereal embrace π Sun hugs and sea water love to you π
Agreed – very poetic!
Thank you so much π xx
Beautiful and we are indeed in a wicked world that we are in today, Where is this photo from? looks interesting π
The photo is from Friday Fictioneers prompt that says we have to write a fiction of 100 words. And the real source of photo is mentioned. Thank you so much andy for liking and understanding my thoughts ! My Love to you xx
Ah gotcha and as ever you’re so welcome, love reading your words π xx
Beautiful!
Thank you Maria, Pleasure to have you here π xx
Very poetic prose…
Thanks a bunch Ali very nice of you to say that π xx